BoogaVerse Project

MAP OF PLANET BOOGA POST

Each continent (exception of Deimos Valley)
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"Except for" is more correct imo :D

Their duties is to protect Booga from a powerful threat—whenever it made be. There is rumors of a 7th Dragon.
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I think it should be

"Their duties is to protect Booga from a powerful threat—whenever it happens."

or

"Their duties is to protect Booga from a powerful threat—whatever it may be. "


Canon Characters can established buildings geared towards specific things
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Probably "Canon characters can establish buildings for specific purposes" sounds better?

They have beautiful architecture throughout the land and preserved for tourists attractions.
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"They have beautiful architecture throughout the land that are preserved for tourists attractions."

however, locals are warned to not wake the wrath of Zillon when he sends out series of warning signs through mini-earthquakes.
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I think "because" instead of "when" is better. hmm

I'll continue reading later xD These are the things I noticed so far
 
Thanks! I'll update the changes you suggested in a bit :pimp:
 
The grammar for every post from the bottom of the thread up to the Lore of Boogaverse has been revised and fixed by me.
 
Thanks you two! Keep up the good work!
 
However, in order for the pact to be complete, a price may be paid
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"completed, a price must be paid" is better because it is a required thing

Decades of adapting to the land, change the biology of Demons
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"Decades of adapting to the land changes the biology of Demons "

or

"Decades of adapting to the land changed the biology of Demons"

depending on which one you prefer

Desolate Lands, was a barren continent striped of its personality due to brutal wars. It was once a beautiful continent, known as Rupoee in vast environment, wildlife and cultural diversity.
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"It was once a beautiful continent, known as Rupoee with vast landscapes, wildlife and cultural diversity. "

And I think that's all the issues I can find in the posts above the Lore
 
While I go on checking Hairball's typo fixes have been properly applied, I have one question:
 Clan of Swords has a Federal Japan setting in contrast to Hero City City being a more Futuristic atmosphere.
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Is it really Federal Japan? Or is it Feudal Japan? The two eras are quite different methinks  :teehee:
 
Yeah lol! That was an "oops" on my part :lmao:
 
BoogaVerse Project Changes/Addition effective 

Character Threads Mandatory
  • Reason: This will be easier to maintain and control of the character section. If you have multiple characters, it is required to be place under one thread. No exceptions. Staring now, everyone's thread that isn't merged into a singular one will be merged. They will be notified when this happens.
Canon Characters
  • Canon Characters' status will change in BoogaVerse. With the exception of God Characters, Canon Characters can freely move around in BoogaVerse. However, they still need to returned to the houses or they will be turned into statue due to the overabundance of energy BoogaVerse brings.
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BoogaVerse Proposals
  • Long-Term Villains to received their own threads. This will be an collection of highly and powerful villains that exist in BoogaVerse. Should this be created?
  • Story Saga: This is where huge story-lines will take place over the course of BoogaVerse. For example, the Magiana-Queen Story Line is currently active in Shina Ania. The Solarian story-line is currently affected Paradice and Empire. Should we have an summary in BoogaVerse of important storylines that took place?
  • Ocean Prefix. This was mentioned in the thread earlier. Should an prefix like this be added? 
What are your thoughts?
 
I think the importance of storylines should be summarized depending on how widely known they will be in-game. 

Ex. Port Graham's destruction by Broly has been made known at several different regions/continents. So that warrants a summary. If the event occurs at a remote area and the news stays relatively to a small area and doesn't become famous among the region or internationally, then it wouldn't need one. You could just put that at the beginning of the thread itself.

It should be approached with whether or not it is something everyone needs to know about and would be required to know.

Long-term villains is a tricky subject to coordinate. So I won't have an opinion for now. 

My opinion is the same regarding Ocean tags.
 
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