Disgraced beginnings: A.U DBZ ( potato/hairball)

(I'm on my phone so I can't fix it yet xD)

The aliens discussed for a few more minutes, then silence began to full the air again. No one knew how long had passed since their departure, but it seemed most of them had fallen asleep. Aelith didn't however. It was as if she didn't need any sleep. She sat in the same pose, staring into the distance, probably thinking about the past or the future.

It was roughly an hour when the ship rumbled again. The robotic voice in the speakers told everyone on board they were getting ready to board the mothership. The guards were running around to check everything and prepare for it.
 
(It's alright XD Just funny as anything because it looks like it's shouted.)


Maren, along with the rhino looking alien and a few others beginning to fall asleep after a while once they ran out of things to talk about, Maren himself didn't sleep well with the thought that he would likely never make it back home being in the back of his mind. Everyone he knew, everyone that he cared for likely thought he was either dead or had fallen down some pit to die a slow and painful death...not something terribly uncommon and it being one of the many reasons so few ventured to the surface. What would his parents think?...would they even care that he had disappeared so suddenly?

These thoughts only being able to be dwelled on for an hour or so as the ship rumbled and the sound of guards shouting orders to each other could soon be heard, albeit muffled, within the cells, Maren only bothered to open his eyes when the ship decided to lurch forward and nearly every alien in the cells were shifted off their feet. It was unnerving, to say the least, a few groans of complaints coming from the creature's that were now awake.
 
An enormous space ship shaped like a dish revealed itself. Compared to it, the other ship looked so tiny. A hatch opened to take in the smaller cargo ship. Once it had safely landed inside, the rumbling stopped. It took another 20 minutes for them to unload the supplies.. Eventually, the guards came and began forcing them out of the cells. They were led out of the ship and escotted into an open space.

The Saiyan was leaning on one of the walls watching them in boredom from afar. He secretly wished Vegeta and Nappa had let him tag along. It was boring. His attention was diverted to a long headed alien oming through the door. 

"Are these the new slaves?" The alien asked.

"No, they are Frieza's make up artist,. You idiot, of course they are the new slaves, Appule." The saiyan rolled his eyes.

"Stop acting like a pain in the ass, Raditz." The long haired alien snapped.

"Anyway, my job is done. They're all yours." Raditz moved away from the wall, attempting to leave.

"You should know better than to make fun of Lord Frieza, monkey. You are lucky they haven't demoted you to guarding duty. A weaking like y-" Mummured Appule.

That pushed a button. The saiyan turned around and grabbed Appule by the collar of his armor. "A weakling like who? I'm more than capable of ripping off your head right here and now. I would call Frieza a bitch if I want." He pushed the alien away and walked off through the open door.

Aelith tilted her head. "They seem to hate one another. I wonder what was it about."

The Torian was in fact snickering. His ears had the blessing of super hearing and he had picked it all up. That was funny.

"What is it Isvan?" Aelith looked up at the nearly 2 meter tall cat alien, confused.

"Just soomething funny."

"What is it?"

Before there could be an answer, the guards had urged them forward again.
 
(Trying to put my share into moving the story forward :p Your a lot better at this than I am)

Maren, the rhino looking alien, and about a dozen or so others not putting up the protest they could have as they were led to what would be their eventual fates, no one seemed to be willing to be a hero seeing as what had happened to the outspoken individual from earlier. It was common instinct to not want to die and no one was truly dumb enough to think they could do more than get a beating or worse for protesting. Yes, it was a 'pathetic' sight that a group of so many were being controlled by only a few, but there was no common unity to convince anyone that working together was the best way to go right now.

"Freak..." Muttering quietly under his breath as he caught sight of the long-haired alien who had nearly broken his skull earlier as they were herded into an open space, the human's strong-willed spirit hadn't been broken down by the jerk just yet as he gave a sharp glare to the individual. Assuming that the alien would at least not be able to hear him from the distance he was at, Maren knew at least one individual behind him had heard as the sound of an annoyed sight reached his ears. The triple eyes alien
had seen the result of the cocky human mocking Raditz earlier, a second time surely to be the death of the teen.

Being unable to hear the sound of the two alien's arguing a distance away, nearly everyone could at least see that the two had some sort of dislike for each other. It seemed many here had a dislike for each other, most of them probably not having been put into their positions willingly in the first place. Maren hearing the sound of the Torian snickering nearby just as they were urged forward though, the human growled angrily under his breath as he would have given nearly anything to be able to show that he was capable of fending his own.

The group of slaves being led into an area that was only slightly smaller than the previous one as they were herded forward, some rather forcefully as they lagged behind, it was nearly identical to the one from earlier sides the fact that various groups of soldiers lingered here and there, some snickering at the sight of the beaten down group of captured aliens. It wasn't as if they hadn't seen similar groups before, but this one looked especially pathetic. Most of them would probably die in their first few days in the mines, the weakest looking individuals like the human and the bug girl probably only being good for target practice.
 
The new slaves were led through a few corridors then into a chamber where about a hundred others like them were kept. The only improvement was that there appeared to be food and drink provided in small amount. The long faced alien was discussing with some others about setting up the course for planet #915, assumingly where they would be mining. And something about health evaluation?

They weren't put into the cells right away. Instead, the guards led them into a clinic like room, where a scanning machine was, and a few scientist. The aliens were speaking in a different language but somehow Aelith could translate them.

"They are going to scan our power level, and make sure we don't carry any contagious diseases." She explained.
 
Maren feeling the urge to show these freaks a thing or two as he and the other slaves were led through a few halls and into what seemed to be a large room like before, the human was clearly weaker than most of the others who were being kept in the chamber despite his bad attitude, even the weaker among the group's probably being ale to beat Maren to a pulp if he stepped out of line. It was unnerving, to say the least...the human had never been around anyone but other humans, him always having assumed that he would be strong enough beat anyone who came his way. It didn't seem that was going to be a possibility anymore though, Maren watching as individuals were put into the scanning machine while Aelith explained what the machine did.

"Power level? You mean kinda like strength?" Maren glancing at Aelith as the group they were in was herded towards the machine, the human could feel his heart pounding as the first alien, a thick-skinned looking creature, was made to go into the scanner. Maren being only a few individuals behind the alien as he shifted nervously in his chains, it didn't take long for the stranger to get a reading back of just under 400 as he was pushed along. The line moving along until it was Maren and Aelith's turn, the human had decided in his mind that he wasn't going to make this easy...why should he go along willingly through this when his life was potentially on the line?
 
(I need to varify Aelith is not a bug girl xD i will draw her when i have time) 

"Yeah. It's how they know how strong you are." She nodded slightly. She watched the aliens walk through the scanner one by one. It seemed most of them were around 200 to 400. When it was finally their turn, she looked at Maren to see if he wanted to go first, but he. Didn't seem like he wanted to. She stepped forward and stood in the scanner. 

The light swept through her and the machine beeped. 

{{Species: Rians. Height: xxx Weight xxx Condition: Healthy. Power level: Error// Undetectable}} 

"That's a first."

The scientists looked surprised. They tried the scan a few times but got the same result. They looked pretty confused and eventually decided to let her join the group because she didn't seem to be dangerous anyway. It was strange but everything else was scanable, except for her power level, so they thought it was a glitch.

"Alright, next." The guard said to Maren.
 
(Oh geez >< I am sorry. I probably got it confused back in that cell part. And take your time! I know mine personally wasn't the best drawing, but I am curious...what do you think of Maren so far?)


Maren watching curiously as most of the alien's who went through the scanner seemed to be around 200-400, the human had no idea what it met but assumed he would probably be only a little below it, him being pretty confident in his abilities when he was not bound. Lagging behind Aelith despite his confidence as he wasn't really sure what to make of the machine before them though, Maren wanted ...no, he was just a little curious if this mysterious girl would be stronger than him. Maybe it made him a wimp, but for having never seen a piece of electrical equipment in his life the teen felt he was doing pretty damned well.

The human raising a brow as Aelith went into the machine before him, Maren and only about three others behind him were left as the girl got her scan. A few murmurs coming from the remaining slaves as it seemed that Aeilith's power level was undetectable for some odd reason as the machine swept over her, no one had really seen this happen before with any of the hundreds of others who had gone through it. It especially left the fight-happy Maren disappointed, the teen having been looking forward to how strong she was.

'Well, there goes that. Maybe I won't be the weakest here after all'

Glaring at the guard's as he was pushed forward to go into the machine, Maren felt his heart racing as he had never seen anything like it before, just as nearly everything else around here. The only thing that stopped the teen from freaking out was his want to see what his own power level was, his deciding to brave it for now as le let himself be scanned.


{{Species: Human. Height: 5'1 Weight 145 Condition: moderate. Power level: 23}}
 
(He's great. Btw I can do a drawing of him too if you tell be the color.)

There were snickers from many aliens that had already gone through the scanner. 

"I told you the kid is all talk." Someone said.

The scientists also looked disappointed. But then it was a fine reading compared to most other humans they had scanned before. Maren was urged forward so the rest can be scanned.

The Torian was the next person. 

{{Species: Torian. Height: xxx. Weight: xxx. Condition: Moderate. Minor fractures of the bone structure detected. Power level: 759.}}
 
(Alright, thanks, ^^ I like Aeilith too, she is kinda cute~ I would LOVE you to do that for me though! I am a hell of a lot better at drawing animals and the like than human figures so it would be much appreciated).

I will send you his colors in a message in just a bit ^~^ He isn't terribly special looking.)




Maren feeling his heart drop into the pit of his stomach in humiliation when he heard the other aliens snickering at what his level had read out, the human had been doing his best so far to avoid doing anything terribly stupid that could end up with him being in a worse situation than earlier. Even if he was prone to starting fights and arguments, the headstrong teen knew better until now than to think he could take on anyone around him. Of course, even if he knew better if didn't mean he wasn't going to start something for the hell of it, him just waiting for the right opportunity to get back at his perceived captors.

"Is...uh, 23 good?" Maren whispering to Aelith as the Torian's power level from earlier was read as 759, the human easily brushed it off as being because the individual was an 'alien'...not something he himself seemed to realize he was to everyone else here as well now. To Maren, he was the only 'normal' one here, everyone else being kind of weird looking in his eyes  "I bet I could kick that cat guy's ass right here and now".
 
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