ShineVerse Journal

[ShineCero]

Deadline today. No updated word counts, more or less the same. I've begun rewriting the first mission to be more "appealing" and engaging. In order to slowly introduce the world of "Good Days" and its affairs with other worlds. By the time Monday rolls around, I'll update the original thread for review!

 

[ShineCero]

Took a break, but I still managed to do some editing, additions and improving the first draft! For this second draft, I've added 1024 words! Witht hat, I've completed Episode 1 and 2. Next deadline is Wednesday, and will work towards finishing Episode 3 :kirbydab:

 

[ShineCero]

I’ve decided to cancel Carnage Hero, and instead to merge it with Good Days. There’s a similar character that will appear in the future essentially acts the same way (including his dynamic with another character). And since Carnage Hero was originally intended to take place in the same world as Good Days, this was an easy process to make by merging those two characters. Carnage Hero will be his codename that he uses. This goes the same for No Heroes (originally titled No More Heroes); I’ll incorporated elements and characters I’ve created in there and repurposes them for Good Days standards.

To put it simply; I’ve cut down everything to three things:

Good Days | Simple | Powerpuff Girls Burst!

Please look forward to the next information stage for the other two soon! I’ve already put down the basic ideas and concepts already for them.

The deadline is more or less the same; I haven’t replaced too much of Episode 3! Hope to keep this steady growth for the next deadline on Friday.

My goal is to finish the second draft before the end of the month. That way, the next few months will be spent on storyboarding and finally, making it an “official comic”, using the draft as a basis. I’ll upload the second draft for review when I finished!

 

[ShineCero]

Still working on the 2nd Draft! Will post an update of my progression either tomorrow or Sunday!!

Really need to clean up the first 3 posts since they're severely out of date :joy:

 

[ShineCero]

Gearing up to finish the next episode of Good Days (redit) this week! :kirbydab: Will update the OP to include new stuff once I dish out these last few drawings for Fright Nights.

 

[ShineCero]

Been quite a while since I visit this thread! I think its time for a little reconstructing