Power Rangers: SwordFighters [Registration]

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Alzoru said:

  • Name: Mezura Uruk
  • Gender: F
  • Age: 17?
  • Ethnicity: Middle-east?
  • Personality: Shy, but very helpful and seemingly honest. Her shyness only adds to her mysterious nature, one that she rather intentionally keeps up.
  • Background: Claims to be from Sumer, the ancient mother civilization. She claims to have been sent into the future long ago by a wizard, though whether or not this is true is unknown. She seems to have simply appeared in America around two years ago, and seems to have trouble speaking English. She has made few friends, and is seldom seen un-morphed. Nobody seems to know just where she came from or how the silver ranger powers came into her possession. She seems to just show up whenever to help people in need, and then vanishes just as quickly. She also seems to know quite a bit about making pottery.
  • Ranger: Spirit of Light, Silver Ranger
    Weapon: Small broadsword and shield (if that's okay)
Is this okay, guys?

Few things:
- Mezura being from the past, travel to the future and all that, needs to be cut. Mezura's backstory needs to be rewritten as "normal teenager" along with the others because this contradicts the established lore in the OP (the lore is crucial for details). She won't know that she had inherited "Spirit of Light" until RP itself properly starts.  
- No shields.
 
I was going to have it that she's basically crazy, not really from the past. But I will still change things up, okie-dokie Shinebro.
Rewrote. Better?
 
Alzoru said:

  • Name: Mezura Uruk
  • Gender: F
  • Age: 17?
  • Ethnicity: Middle-east?
  • Personality: Shy, but very helpful and seemingly honest. Her shyness only adds to her mysterious nature, one that she rather intentionally keeps up.
  • Background: Doesn't talk much about where she's from, but if pressured she usually says Indonesia. She seems to have a fascination with ancient civilizations like Sumer and Babylon, and is taking college credit Archaeology classes at high school. She's relatively new in school and very mysterious, mostly because of being new. She's been to many other schools in the past.
  • Ranger: Spirit of Light, Silver Ranger
    Weapon: Spear
Is this okay, guys?

Alzoru said:
I was going to have it that she's basically crazy, not really from the past. But I will still change things up, okie-dokie Shinebro.


Rewrote. Better?



This is way better. Approved.
 
yay
 
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